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for her clothes and hair, maybe a touch of slightly darker line work will make those areas stand out more.
This is lovely and I shall fav it.
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her face is really pretty~
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"Love is patient and kind; it is not jealous or conceited or proud" ~1 Corinthians 13:4
"Nobody can be un-cheered with a balloon." ~Winnie-the-Pooh
Crit? Hmm...I wish the hand had less outlines and more contrast like the face does. And the background seems strange to me, the angle of the balcony (?) is kinda like a top view, but the tree and building are like a straight on view. maybe you could move the bg layer down so that the railing doesn't seem so high.
thanks for the advice too, I may do that, although I didnt feel there was a perspective issue. The building, tree and face are straight on view because they're all the same height, but the ground isnt. I'll re-assess the situation
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I was here^_^*Sean Fisher*